30/11/15 Update

Today Mathew peer reviewed our music video and my blog.  His feedback Included adding more Film theories to my blog as there are non, and he also recommended reshooting the opening scene of our music video as the shots are out of focus and having shots that are out of focus at the start of a music video is  to practical. also he recommends  that also re-shoot the footage that we took in the studio as the lighting levels are not great for the video, and again some of studio shots are out of focus like the guitar shot. because all of the shots for the music video had not been collaborated some other members of the class got the wrong narrative, which could be fixed with the next set of shots however, if this is still the issue then we will have to come up with a new strategy to work around this factor.