Rough cut three update

The third rough cut has been uploaded and a few improvements will need to be made which would make the music video look better, the first few shots of the car will need to be retaken as the are out of focus and are blurry, this degrades the quality of the intro, however I think the opening of the music video just needs a re-shoot as its work well with the video. that would be the only issue we would need to take action for up until 0:55 which is where the music video is missing a few scenes reshoots will need to be scheduled. however the majority of the footage that is currently in will make it into the final music video as the footage we have of the flash backs works well with the chorus, and we would perhaps only need to get some better shots of the lead singer with the lip sync as the dark lighting contrasts the light levels too much which degrades the narrative. From 0:55-1:13 we will need to take some more footage to mix up the dryness of the two shots of the lead artist just singing, we will need to get some shots in a different location, like we did in Roseberry topping, but not there as we agreed it would be too much hassle for the amount of footage we got. from 1:13-1:40 our flashback shots a good and it works well for that section of the chorus, however after 1:40 we have just frame work half of which will probably not make it into the final music video and we will most surely come up with an alternate ending to the music video.